“To whatever’s next”, we promised,
As we looked upon that field of blood.
Hand in hand together we stood,
While the world before us burned.
Waiting to enter the After together,
While this world would be nothing but dust.
“To whatever’s next”, we promised,
As our souls refused to part with us.
We could feel our bodies failing,
As the fire now reached our shores,
Yet our eyes refused to stray away,
From the gaze we had taken so long to trust.
Our souls shone together even as our heartbeats slowed,
We could see the reaper now standing before our lifeless corpses,
To pass on to the light of might all we had to do was let go, he told,
But we held on letting him know that our souls were forever joined.
A vow of forever, for our souls to be together.
An Oath to keep always, as we journey beyond our days.
Our souls were placed together before we were born,
And they will never be apart is what we had long ago sworn.
“To whatever’s next”, we had once promised,
Until this world was nothing but dust.
“To whatever’s next”, we had once vowed,
And our souls still dance together in both rain and fire.
A Vow of Forever
~by PRARTHANA MODI
This is so beautifullll
literally in tears
I never thought such beauty could be expressed by words solely… but the poet proves me wrong once more. I’m in tears.
wow this is such a beautiful poem literally got goosebumps in the last para
Too many mistakes, though keep trying.
Hi Harshit,
I would love if you could give a complete feedback with the mistakes that you saw. As I know there are neither any spelling errors nor any grammatical ones that aren’t allowed by poetic license. So I would really love if you could help me improve further so thank you very much.
This is such a beautiful and heartfelt poem, I love it
just beautiful
I got goosebumps reading this
Very nic 👍
this is beautiful!!
From one participant and poet to another, this was really amazing.. like soulfelt level ✨️✨️
Always so lovely everytime I read it..
Lovely
Absolutely amazing, genius and beautiful
this is beautiful!!
Wow that hits hard…
It’s so beautiful
Very bad could do better stop asking people to leave a comment so shit yuck man could do better don’t waste your time in doing this stuff still appreciate your efforts to make this
Hi, I didn’t force you to comment or anything. But thank you nonetheless.
Lovely poem😍😍
Keep writing!!!!
Idk really what to write here , prathna modi just told me to comment whatever uk so I just …..started typing whatever came to my mind but I know one thing this woman has wild imagination soo …her stuff is Jurassic…like real big dragons n 🔥
The poet asked me to comment whatever first comes to my mind if I like it and it’s really good so yeah
I know one thing this woman has wild imagination soo …her stuff is Jurassic…like real big dragons n 🔥
Beautiful poem
I am forced by prarthana….help me pls.This poet is wild.
I am kidding….she may be my friend but her imagination is really glamorous and unbelievable!
YRRR….ITS WONDERFUL
Thank you for sharing this with us, Prats! It is beautifully done. Reading it over for the second and third time is no less special than the first time! I hope you will always continue writing 🥰
such a pretty piece of writing, very beautiful.
so beautiful 😍
Such a beautiful poem…Keep writing more!!
I love the flow and the emotions of the poem, very well written
Beautiful❤️
A heart touching poem, keep it up!
Thoughts were amazingly conveyed!
Love it
I love how this poem conveys the love between two souls that even after facing the worst case scenario does not want to let go
A gut wrenching, soul shattering poem. Love it 😍
Wow that was beautiful! Ur very talented
Her poems have always been one of favorites. This is another one of the masterpiece.
She is and have always been my favorite poem. This poem is so beautiful that it leaves me speechless.
She has a way of captivating her readers with words. I’m mesmerized by it
She has a way of captivating her readers with words. I’m mesmerized by it.
She has a way of captivating her readers with words. I’m mesmerized by it.
SOOO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!!!
I’m not really that big on writing/understanding poems but this one just hits you
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